Mathi-chans poetry corner

Hey!! I know that last poem!! xD
Yeah.. I like it ^^

But I like the piraty one better ^^ I wuf it XD Hmm.. but agree with thumbs you sometimes have trouble with the rhythm and rhyme.. but I really like the stories and feelings you try to put in them ^^ You're damn good when it comes to that ^^

I love your poetry Mathi-chan ^_^

The ones I liked the most were the Forgotten Friendship one, as I can find myself in that poem also. And the one of the beach is really nice ^_^ it reminds me of all the times I went to the beach on a holyday... very nice memories ^_^ ... The one of the pirate love is also awesome :D it has a really nice feeling to it, but like Thumbs and Moon said, watch the rhythm and rhyme. And last but not least, the one you posted most recently. God, I like that one :D it's soooo sweet ^_^

You make me want to start writing poems again xD ... yeah I used to write poetry, but I didn't do it in a looong time :P so, damn you for being inspirational... expect a little poetry topic from me in the near future.

most people prefer poems in which they can find themselves/their own feelings i recon and also what i find to be typical for great lord mathi-sama's work is that she tries to attract a wide audience by referring to them in some sort of way

it's just awesomeness being written here, I prefer poems without rhyme but a reason behind the use of words then rhyme in which the only reason using the words is to make it rhyme

@ Kev: I agree that rhyme isn't neccesairy, but a nice rythm is. If you don't have a good rythm in what you're writing, it can be annoying while reading it... though it's not really that bad with Mathi-chan's wrriting, but she still needs to pay a little extra attention to the rythm.