the little poetry corner

hi all

going to post a little poem here... got a bit bored.. do not have any good ideas so pls excuse me if it does not turn out well

a building big and unknown
clothing new and hand made
people excited nd somehow formiliar

although all this makes no sense to me
although i barely know any of them
anything about this building or this crowd in front of it

all i know is this
a friend with more to come
a new costume with many more to be seen
one day unlike i have ever had
Chibicon 2009 be rdy cuz thumbs up will be there \o/

great poem! I like it and can't wait till chibicon ^^

chibicon... if it does not come soon... terrible... terrrrrrrrrrible... things will happen

considering i have to wait so much a little poëm dedicated to waiting


sometimes fast
sometimes slow

never wanted
never needed

always annoying
always unarappreciated

if only we'd waited more
if only we'd appreciated it more

the little things we share
the little things that about which we care

waiting is not all that bad
waiting is not all that boring

if only u'd see farther then the truth
it is still a long long freaking time till the chibicon...

The first poem... O.o is the weirest and most abstract poem I've ever seen XD
.. I kinda like it xP

I think the second one is cool XD again about chibicon.. what is it with you guys and the chibicon? >.<
hehe, keep up the good work!! ^^ I'd like to read more..

i like abstractism... it is not a real image of anything thus the people can just dream about what it is and mix it with their own ideas and likings o.o

nd atm the chibicon is my only light in a very dark tunnel nd i will take down anyone who stands between me
and the light

considering i got a comment about my poëms always going on about the chibicon here are 2 i came up with while trying to fall asleep (completely not chibicon related)

cold, stiff, heavy
time seems to stand still

running, flowing, ravaging
as i recall what has been done

flashes, voices, feelings
will it ever let me go


nd the 2nd



As my fingers move gently up her side
i feel her tingling lightly as i go

her mouth, like frozen in an attempt to speak
her neck, craving to kiss it

her breathing starts to become heavy
as i look into her eyes
a twinkle appears
like a star

but not even the stars can see us here
nobody can c us
and we can't c anyone
touch after touch
kiss after kiss

kinda new at this poëm genre so dunno if it is any good but i will undoubtable be hearing about it soon

I'm not really a poetry person, more interested in prose :P but whatever...

Well, the first one about chibicon, I can really relate to it xD ... that's kinda how I felt for Abunai 2008... specially the bid, unknown building part... we kept getting lost. :P
With the 2nd poem about chibicon, I'm warning you to watch out that you don't get stuck in the same subject... and even without the chibicon part, it would be a nice poem that many people could relate to. I mean, everyone has to wait sometime, right? :P

About the other 2 poems: I told ya the bed could be an inspirational place! and omfg! you lied to me! you said you didn't sleep!
but in all seriousness, I can't really grasp the feeling you want to express with the first one.. well, it's obvious a bit of a depressing one, but I can't really feel what exactly you want to say with it.
And the last one: it's nicely written ^_^ it has a bit of a romantic, though slightly dark feeling attached to it

Well, I hope you can do something with that ^_^

i said trying to sleep... not meaning that i was actaully sleeping...

also ye not going to do any con poems anymore for a while i think, and for the 3rd poem i kinda tend to make poems in a way that only someone who has experienced a simular case understand it and no it is not depression ^^ and also the dark thought u mentioned is most likely the lust that i tried to put into it in small portions

With depressing, I didn't mean an actual depression neccecairily.. just something that's... not really happy :P
When I read something, I almost immediately get an image in my mind. Often it has a color that's very dominant, and that's about the feeling I get from it. But it's sometimes difficult to express it in words. So it's easily misunderstood what I mean :P ... with the last poem, the dark part was because I got an image of night, though not out in the open, but somewhere confined, and that had a bit of a black color, and though not as dominant as the black, there was also red, like the lust you mentioned, but I translated it to romantic :P ... maybe it sounds kinda confusing, but I hope you understand what I mean now xD ^^;;

well it is not about depression or anything like it but i understand if people get that image, and yes now that u explain it that is more about the colour i do understand what u mean. Nd lust is more or less a part of love if u ask me, if u really love someone u start to develope a certain lust to be around that person at the least

Aww man!! I dont know who you were thinking of with that last poem.. but it's amazing!! I really love it!! X3 she's gotta be the luckiest person ever!! (especially when she knows its for her xP)

I realy like the blue poem too xP Makes me.. think of things.. weird memories of mine XD ^^:; if you understand that part..

awww.. please thumbelina!! post more!! I wanna more!! please?? PLEASEEE? fow me?

lol.. xD but seriously *loves red poem, loves red poem*

hehe ^^ well i will be sure to post some more wille edit this one if nobody posted in between... will c when though ... first gonna start with studying economics today

A Pair Of Four Eyes


On the surface our eyes look alike
I feel like your eyes tell me stories
Like mine tell you

But as time passes i start to c
that your eyes do not show all that u feel
Not like mine tell you

The more i look into ur eyes
The more u look like someone else
We seemed so simular at the start
But now we are like 2 completely apart


Brown Hollow Eyes


Whenever i look into ur big brown eyes
i just can't help to stare
they seem to be so dark
so hollow
so simple
yet can't help it

whenever i look into them
everything around me seems to dissapear
except those simple brown eyes

as the day goes by nothing seems to change
the eyes still look the same
yet i have no interest to look away

although i do not know why
they seem to be all that there is for me
as i look on the clock to c how long it has been
since i've seen them that day
one minute is all that has passed


the red one is not that great this time ... was a bit distracted too much on msn to focus on it i guess ><

I have to say I like the chibicon poems haah xD
but I also like the others, dun worry.
and about the last two, I like the red one the most ^^

tnx ^^ so far the red one is the one being liked the most xD every time red 2 blue 0 ... and ye figured u'd like the chibicon ones

chibicons are cuwl, I think the other poems are nice 2, though I don't know what or who your inspiration is, you get results in a positive way (lol I would steal your poems if I would be evil and say I made them to a girl when I like her) but guess you should use them yourselves and I'll find other ways to get someone to like me -_-

first of all i'd like to state that stealing my poems will lead to ur death when i find out (not joking find it to be highly rude and the same as identity theft as well as just lying to the girl in the first place, basically u are not only lying to her about it not being ur poem but as it are written feelings u are also lying about ur feelings as well) also if u consider poetry to be a way to get girls to like u then all u need to do is practice it, the way i c it with myself and other people who write it is that we first start with the basics which is the story itself and afterworths the rhyming so just make a good embodiment of what u are trying to say to her (assuming that u are starting to write for a girl in specific right away) and after u are done take a look at it, change a couple of words here and there give it a better rhyme/sound to it, take it easy, with written poetry u have the advantage of having the time to tweek on it as much as u need to get it the way u like it. Also a last tip if u cannot quite get a good feeling/vibe/source of inspiration, do not dwell on it, go take a walk outside or something change ur surroundings/environment as they effect u inpsirationally and thus another environment might give u the idea u needed. that is about as far as my advice goes ... pretty long post i will keep it to this until further questions are asked.


ps i highly doubt that u are the kind to steal anything judging from as far as i have known u

well I was joking, I said if I was evil (u Think I am? O_O) and of course I dont think poetry a way to get girls, I just hoped some time ago I was able to make some, but I just can't, and can live with that.

Thanks for the advice anyway, it is not only handy for writing poetry, but I think it works as well to write stories and draw art

ye basically it is a general advice for a lot of art vorms, just make some "sketches" to really get an idea of what exactly u want before u work on details as otherwise u might get screwed in the end as u work out everything to the detail and find out that that was not the way u wanted it xD
nd nah so far ur not that evil o.- which is a bad thing for u ... if u recall the bunny hat ... watch out for it brother >< we both know that she is not going to give up on that one soon but about poetry ehm... well i have not seen ur work that u tried to make so cannot say anything about that

that is already lost in the chaotic chaos called my room, probably it's already dumped because of one of my mothers crazy clean-ups XD

meh, true it is a problem if I'm not evil enough, but I always have my legs and sprinting abilities XD

u know u remind me about the bunnies at the animal shelter with the "legs and sprinting abilities" makes me want to write a poem about animals... going to work on that lter on
a little something that i made on the new topic in the everything else section

no matter the hardship
no matter the pain
no matter the solitude
that u've had in ur life
for those who stand against it
there will be a solution
to those who fall before it
nothing is certain
if u do not believe me
u do not have to
i've had the same been the same
and i have found my solution
i dare u to stand up and find urs

Yeah.. I recognize that poem XD lol.. it's a nice one though ^^ didnt know you made it yourself..
This time the rythm is also pretty good XD takes me a while to get into it though >.<
but keep writing! *still loves red poem* write more more more!!

ye my rhytm can usually use a bit of work ehm... red poem... well i can post some more later on i guess ... kinda feel like writing some more red ones