Moon's poetry lair

Ah.. I'll just try posting some xD I'm not that damn good, or even close to it.. but oh well xP Here some randomness I wrote today..

The call of drugs

The call of drugs
like heroine to me
cocaine in the dark
XTC when she dances next to me
Marihuana needs 9 leaves
but your two eyes say enough
the high levels of your LSD
I want to drown in drugs

I'm not even sure if marihuana has 9 leaves XD but anyway xP

ha! Good! I like it, almost erotic, definately intoxicating ^^

Yay!! thank you :3
funny how you use the word intoxicating XD

I'll post another poem.. which is quite a bit older:

Pain

When I get scattered
of pain
of sorrow
a million pieces on the ground
all are me
and all are not
but when they are
scattered
lost
a million pieces
which one will be most me?

Another poem which I made.. it's kinda stupid.. (and also old) I used to walk the dog in the same circle every day.. one brilliant day I thought I'd go the other way around.. and you suddenly notice that world looks totally different when you look at it from the other side o.O

Different view

A street
I used to walk
day after day
the same way
straight ahead
never look back
but one day
I turned
I didnt reckonize
the street
I walked so long

wohoa I love your poems! keep writing! I like the last one for some reason the most xD

Thank you ^^ The last one is a weird one though xP Another old one of mine:

Birthday present

You gave me a smile as birthday present,
and I didn't know what to say

You gave me a hug as birthday present,
and I didn't know what to do

You gave me a kiss as birthday present,
and I didn't know what to think

You gave me your love as birthday present,
and I knew I'd keep it forever

isn't it recognize instead of reckonize ? :P other than this silly comment I think they are really poems with a meaning, and you can say it's randomness, but I hope the meaning of your poems isnt randomness :P?

8MoonLight8 a scris:Thank you ^^ The last one is a weird one though xP Another old one of mine:

Birthday present

You gave me a smile as birthday present,
and I didn't know what to say

You gave me a hug as birthday present,
and I didn't know what to do

You gave me a kiss as birthday present,
and I didn't know what to think

You gave me your love as birthday present,
and I knew I'd keep it forever

It's anything but weird wobals, it's nice! It really conjures up images of two people..nice ^^

meaning is most of the time not randomness no XD most of the time its getting my depressed feelings outta my system *grrr* like POOF like that yeh.. only angry version <.<"

I kind of lost the poems I used to really like actually xD lol.. I have so many things scattered all over my room.. most of them are very short stories.. that helps the best for me ^^ but.. I have a writers block now.. somehow.. the past few weeks XD I cant put anything nice on paper.. and I have to force myself for unnice things oO hmm.. I think every hero gets that every once in a while.. but the heros of my stories are made strong.. they'll survive!! XD and for the poems.. well, lets hope I dun get depressed XD cuz with a writersblock, I cant get it out of my system.. then my system will have to grow and it'll get bigger than my ego.. that's bad xD

Thanks a lot for the comments!!

the bday one is my favorite so far it seems that my specialty is love poems or very depressing ones cuz that is where i can really put some thought and emotion into , the thing i like about the bday one is the simplicity yet perfect description of the situation

Ah.. just another poem.. you can comment on it all you want.. havent thought of what I think of it.. I dont care a fuck actually xD

I see a child
she's so young
but her eyes so old
the pain they reflect
her shoulders bending to immense weight
like she's about to cry
I feel my heart break
to not see the horrid sight
I turn away from the mirror

I dont even know if everything is correct english o.O

the english is correct and i like the sudden twist to the poem it is a nice one o.o

Thnx thumbs ^^ but I feel like I should try harder... all you guys THINK about your poem.. and make totally cool stuff.. and I never realy do.. and when I do.. you guys like it so much way better >.< so.. I should defenitely try harder.. will post something I tried hard on soon XD if I can find it o.o

0.0..I must be blind..sudden twist? It's about a cold child with a lot of burdens..right? ..hmm.. You see people like that sometimes..and its amazing, having been one...all it takes is just..one person to come along...and take interest..to show..they care..even a little..about you..it makes everything so much better..:D:D

the twist being that she did not saw just a random girl but herself...

and will be waiting for the poem susan-sam

|I hereby sincerely apologize from the deepst of my heart

okay sorry about the remark of your spelling, that just sucks of me, hell who cares about that anyway -_-

anyway, you just confirmed again you have talent for this, last p
oem is rateless if ya know what I mean (like some things are priceless)