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    Mesaj Scris de SnowFox Mier Mai 20, 2009 7:07 pm

    this is one of my "poems" that i wrote in english:

    Time
    Time is not my friend
    all i can do
    is waiting here

    Time is not my friend
    just trembling here
    i get mad

    Time is not my friend
    im every day sitting here
    so lonely

    Time is now my friend
    you are here
    just here by my side
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    Mesaj Scris de ThumbsUp Mier Mai 20, 2009 7:11 pm

    ehm.. i like it, by any chance a poem about how someone managed to turn from impatient to patient ?
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    Mesaj Scris de SnowFox Mier Mai 20, 2009 7:43 pm

    I´d like to tell you what it means, but i have no clue.
    I mostly write, when it seems to want to be written, and i don´t think about what i write, atleast during the writing. Afterwards....another thing
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    Mesaj Scris de ThumbsUp Mier Mai 20, 2009 7:49 pm

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    aha... so basically u are more like a medium for ur subconsious to express itself into ur poems ?
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    Mesaj Scris de 8MoonLight8 Joi Mai 21, 2009 11:20 pm

    The poem sounds kind of cool ^^ I like the ring to it ^^ and how you keep repeating the first sentence ^^

    and dont a lot of poems work like that? Like.. just blurring out what you feel.. maybe sometimes when you dont really know it? o.O
    Do you not write that many poems in english snow? I get that feeling from what you said o.O
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    Mesaj Scris de ThumbsUp Vin Mai 22, 2009 8:59 am

    i think that he actually doesn't i think he once heard him say that he doesn't normally write them in english i assume he normally writes in german ?

    also i do express my feelings in my poems but i never got no clue as wht they are about
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    Mesaj Scris de SnowFox Vin Mai 22, 2009 1:03 pm

    sorry that i didn´t respond yesterday, had a lot of things to do.
    Well, usually i write in german, that´s right.
    I don´t know what my poems and stories are about, just what i think they mean. They are like....a thing on itself, and i´m just the one that gives them a real appearance, so they "live" without me.
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    Mesaj Scris de ThumbsUp Vin Mai 22, 2009 3:12 pm

    u sound like some kind of mix of frankenstein and shakespear...
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    Mesaj Scris de SnowFox Vin Mai 22, 2009 3:21 pm

    hehe....i´m not quite sure about that one, i don´t think i´m Shakespeare, Frankenstein is maybe more my....direction. Evil
    Oh, don´t misunderstand me, that´s more a kind of self-ironic way of living i practice.
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    Mesaj Scris de ThumbsUp Vin Mai 22, 2009 3:49 pm

    u mean u make zombies ?
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    Mesaj Scris de SnowFox Vin Mai 22, 2009 4:33 pm

    no, not really Wahaha
    i thought about the monster´s outward appearance.
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    Mesaj Scris de ThumbsUp Vin Mai 22, 2009 4:35 pm

    aha ... ye lets just keep it to ur poems before i start to think way too many weird things about u ...

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